Literacy

Writing a Recount

The Spark

Concept

A recount retells events that have already happened, in the order they occurred. It is written in the first person (I, we), in past tense, and uses time connectives (first, then, next, after that, finally) to link events. A recount has: an orientation (who, when, where), a series of events, and a personal reflection at the end.

Activity

Ask your child to tell you about something they did recently — a trip, a meal, a game. As they speak, say: 'That's a recount! You're telling me what happened, in order, using 'I'. Today we're going to write one properly.'

Check

Does the recount have an orientation, sequenced events with time connectives, and a personal reaction at the end? Is it written in first person and past tense consistently?

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Put the Recount Events in Order

Number these recount events in the correct time order (1–5).

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Finally, we drove home and I fell asleep in the car.
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First, we packed our lunch and drove to the national park.
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After that, we found a perfect spot by the creek to eat our sandwiches.
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Then, we hiked along the bush trail for over an hour.
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Next, we spotted a lizard on a warm rock and took lots of photos.
TipRemind your child that recounts always retell events in the order they happened.
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Match Time Connective to Its Meaning

Draw a line to match each time connective to what it tells the reader.

First
Then
After that
Finally
Meanwhile
Eventually
happening at the same time as something else
the first thing that happened
the last thing that happened
the next thing that happened
after a long time
the thing that happened after that
TipTime connectives are the glue of recounts — they show the reader when each event happened.
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Is This a Recount Feature?

Circle YES if each feature belongs in a recount, or NO if it doesn't.

Written in first person (I, we)

YES
NO

Written in future tense (will go, will see)

YES
NO

Uses time connectives (first, then, finally)

YES
NO

Includes a personal reflection at the end

YES
NO

Uses commands (Do this! Go there!)

YES
NO

Retells real events in the order they happened

YES
NO
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Identify Recount Features

Read this short recount. Find and label: the ORIENTATION, the EVENTS, and the REFLECTION. RECOUNT: 'Last Saturday I went to the beach with my family. First, we set up our towels near the water. Then, I built the biggest sandcastle I have ever made. After that, we all had fish and chips for lunch. It was one of the best days of the holidays.'

ORIENTATION (who, when, where): ___

EVENT 1: ___

EVENT 2: ___

EVENT 3: ___

REFLECTION: ___

TipRead the recount aloud together first, then work through each label.
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Sort: Recount or Not a Recount?

Sort these text extracts into the correct column.

Yesterday I went to the market.
You will need a spoon and a bowl.
First, we drove to the station.
The sun is hot in summer.
It was the most fun I'd had all year.
Koalas sleep for up to 22 hours.
Then we hiked up to the lookout.
I think you should try harder.
Recount feature
Not a recount feature
TipA recount retells real past events, in order, in first person and past tense.
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Add Time Connectives

Rewrite this recount adding time connectives (First, Then, Next, After that, Finally) to connect the events.

Original: 'We got in the car. We drove to the market. We bought vegetables. We came home. We cooked dinner.' Your version with time connectives:

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Plan Your Recount

Choose something you have done recently. Fill in the plan below using dot points.

ORIENTATION — Who? When? Where?

EVENT 1 (with time connective 'First...')

EVENT 2 (with time connective 'Then...' or 'Next...')

EVENT 3 (with time connective 'After that...')

REFLECTION — How did you feel? What was the best part?

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Write Your Recount

Use your plan to write your full recount. Write in first person (I, we) and past tense. Use time connectives from this list: First, Then, Next, After that, Finally, Later, Eventually.

Title:

Orientation (who, when, where):

Events (use time connectives):

Reflection (how did you feel? what was the best part?):

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Past Tense or Present Tense?

Recounts use past tense. Circle the past tense version of each verb pair.

we ___

went
go

she ___

is seeing
saw

they ___

run
ran

I ___

felt
feel

he ___

calls
called

it ___

happened
happens
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Fix the Tense

This recount has mistakes — some verbs are in the present tense. Find and correct them.

Original: 'Last week I go to the zoo. First we see the lions. Then we walk to the reptile house. Finally we eat ice cream before we go home.' Corrected:

TipRead each sentence aloud — present tense sounds wrong in a story about the past.
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Match Recount Part to Its Purpose

Draw a line to match each part of a recount to what it does.

Orientation
Events
Time connectives
Reflection
Shows the writer's personal response to what happened
Tells the reader who, where and when
Retells what happened in order
Links the events together in the right order
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Tip: Recounts Use First Person Past Tense

A recount is personal — you are telling YOUR story. Use 'I' and 'we'. And because it happened already, use past tense verbs: went (not go), saw (not see), felt (not feel). Check your writing every time using these two rules: 1) Is it first person? 2) Is it past tense?

  • 1Read your last recount aloud — are all verbs in past tense?
  • 2Find 3 past tense verbs in a recount in a book
  • 3Write 5 verbs in present tense and then write their past tense form
  • 4Circle every 'I' and 'we' in a recount — this is the first person perspective
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Sort Time Connectives by Position in a Recount

Sort these time connectives by where they most naturally appear in a recount.

First
Then
Finally
To begin with
Next
At last
After a while
Earlier
Eventually
Near the start
In the middle
Near the end
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Write the Orientation

A good orientation answers: Who? When? Where? Write an orientation for each topic below in 1–2 sentences.

Topic: a day at the beach. Orientation: ___

Topic: a visit to the vet with your pet. Orientation: ___

Topic: your first day at a new activity. Orientation: ___

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Write a Reflection

A reflection tells the reader how you felt about the experience — what you thought, felt, or learned. Write a reflection for each event below.

Event: watching a brilliant fireworks display. Reflection: ___

Event: losing a chess game to a younger sibling. Reflection: ___

Event: finishing a long book. Reflection: ___

TipGood reflections don't just say 'it was fun' — they explain WHY and what the writer will remember.
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Tip: Select the Best Events

Children often try to include EVERYTHING in a recount: 'Then I woke up. Then I had breakfast. Then I brushed my teeth...' Good recount writers are SELECTIVE — they only include the most interesting or important moments. Ask yourself: if I could only tell THREE things about that day, what would they be?

  • 1Choose an event you want to recount
  • 2List everything that happened
  • 3Circle only the 3 most interesting or important moments
  • 4Write your recount using only those 3 events
  • 5Compare: is the selective version better than the list version?
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Order the Recount Sentences

Number these sentences 1–6 to put them in the correct order for a recount.

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Eventually, we arrived back at the car park, exhausted but happy.
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On Sunday morning, Mum and Dad took me to the botanical gardens.
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After that, we had a picnic under the biggest tree I had ever seen.
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It was the most peaceful Sunday I could remember.
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First, we walked along the main path and looked at the rose garden.
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Then, we found a pond with ducks and fed them pieces of bread.
TipLook for time connectives — they are the clearest guide to order.
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Write a Recount About a School Experience

Write a recount about something that happened at school (or during learning at home) recently. Include an orientation, at least 3 events with time connectives, and a reflection. Use past tense throughout.

Title: ___

Orientation: ___

Events:

Reflection: ___

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Recount Journal

Keep a simple recount journal this week — write one short recount (3-5 sentences) each day about something that happened.

  • 1Write a 3-5 sentence recount of today using at least two time connectives
  • 2Illustrate one event from today's recount
  • 3Re-read yesterday's recount and add one more detail you forgot to include
  • 4Share your recount at dinner and ask the family if they remember it differently
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Spark: Recount in Different Forms

Recounts can be written in many forms: diary entries, letters, news reports, memoirs. This week, write the SAME event as three different types of recount.

  • 1Choose one event you want to recount
  • 2Write it as a diary entry
  • 3Write it as a letter to a friend
  • 4Write it as a short news report ('Yesterday, a local child...')
  • 5Compare the three: what changed? What stayed the same?
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Add Personal Reaction to Events

Recounts become more engaging when the writer adds personal reactions — feelings, thoughts, and opinions — to the events. Rewrite each plain event sentence adding a personal reaction.

Plain: We arrived at the airport. → With reaction: ___

Plain: I won the running race. → With reaction: ___

Plain: We got lost in the forest. → With reaction: ___

Plain: The cake collapsed in the oven. → With reaction: ___

TipShow not just what happened, but how you felt about it as it happened.
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Sort: Which Type of Recount?

Recounts come in different types. Sort each text extract into the correct type.

Dear Diary, Today was the best day ever...
Yesterday, a local student was awarded a prize for...
Dear Grandma, You won't believe what happened at the market last Saturday...
I felt so embarrassed when I forgot my lines...
The event took place at 3pm on Tuesday at the community centre...
Guess what? We ended up going to the wrong museum!
Personal diary
Letter to a friend
News report
TipDiscuss how the same event can be told very differently depending on who is writing and why.
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Which Time Connective Fits Best?

Circle the time connective that best connects the events in each sentence pair.

We arrived at the park. ___, we set up the picnic rug.

Finally
First
Eventually

We waited in the queue for an hour. ___, we reached the front.

Then
Eventually
First

The match started. ___ it began to rain.

Eventually
Suddenly
At last

I ate my lunch. ___ I went back outside to play.

After that
Before long
At first
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Recount From a Different Perspective

Think of an event you were part of. Write it first from your own point of view (first person). Then rewrite it from someone else's point of view (third person — he/she/they).

Event: ___

First person recount (I, we): ___

Third person recount (he/she/they): ___

What changed between the two versions? ___

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Match: Recount Opening to Its Purpose

Draw a line to match each recount opening to what it does for the reader.

Last summer, during the hottest week anyone could remember...
When I was six, I had the strangest birthday of my life.
It was a Tuesday morning — the kind that looks ordinary until it isn't.
My family and I arrived at the airport with three hours to spare.
Nobody told me it would be like this.
Grabs the reader with mystery
Sets the scene with specific details
Hooks with an intriguing hint
Begins with time and sets up the narrative
Grounds the reader with familiar facts before the surprise
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Write a Strong Recount Opening

The opening sentence of a recount should hook the reader AND set the scene. Write three different openings for the same event (a trip to the market).

Opening 1 (begins with time and place): ___

Opening 2 (begins with an action): ___

Opening 3 (begins with a feeling or thought): ___

Which opening is most engaging? Why?

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Sort: Selective vs Exhaustive Events

A good recount selects the most important events. Sort these into 'worth including' and 'can leave out'.

We spotted an emu on the road (unusual and interesting).
I put on my seatbelt (normal and unimportant).
The tyre went flat in the middle of the forest (event with tension).
We stopped at a petrol station (routine, adds nothing).
A rainbow appeared just as we reached the lookout (vivid and memorable).
I drank water from my bottle (routine).
Worth including
Can leave out
TipThe test: does this event add something interesting or move the story forward? If not, cut it.
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Write a Recount of a Favourite Memory

Choose a favourite memory and write a full recount with: a strong opening, 3–4 selected events with time connectives, personal reactions during events, and a thoughtful reflection at the end.

Memory chosen: ___

My recount:

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First Person or Third Person?

Read each sentence. Circle whether it is written in first person (I/we) or third person (he/she/they).

She ran to the finish line and collapsed with exhaustion.

First person
Third person

I had never seen anything so incredible in my life.

First person
Third person

We decided to turn back when the storm hit.

First person
Third person

They arrived at the station just as the train was leaving.

First person
Third person

I told Mum what had happened as soon as I got home.

First person
Third person
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Tip: The Best Recounts Are Selective and Personal

The two most important qualities of a great recount are: 1) SELECTIVE — only include the most interesting events; 2) PERSONAL — include your feelings and reactions. This week, practise writing a recount that passes both tests.

  • 1Before writing, list all possible events — then circle only the 3 best ones
  • 2In every event sentence, try to add how you felt or what you thought
  • 3Read your recount aloud — does every sentence add something valuable?
  • 4Cut any sentence that adds no interest or detail — a shorter, better recount is better than a long one
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Evaluate a Recount

Read this recount. Evaluate it using the checklist. Then write two suggestions to improve it. RECOUNT: 'On Monday we went somewhere. We did some things. It was good. Then we came home. I liked it.'

Does it have an orientation (who, when, where)? YES / NO

Does it use time connectives? YES / NO — which ones?

Is it in first person? YES / NO

Is it in past tense? YES / NO

Does it have a reflection? YES / NO

Suggestion 1 to improve it: ___

Suggestion 2 to improve it: ___

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Spark: Recount Journal Week

Write a recount journal entry every day this week. By the end, you will have 5 recounts — one per day. On Friday, read them all back and choose the best one to share.

  • 1Monday: Write a recount of something you did on the weekend
  • 2Tuesday: Write a recount of a funny moment
  • 3Wednesday: Write a recount of something surprising
  • 4Thursday: Write a recount of a meal or outing you remember
  • 5Friday: Read all 5 entries. Choose the best one and improve it
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Recount With Dialogue

A recount can include snippets of dialogue to bring it to life. Write a short recount that includes at least 2 lines of direct speech. Use speech marks correctly.

My recount with dialogue:

Dialogue lines I used: ___

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Order a More Complex Recount

Number these sentences 1–7 to put them in the correct recount order. Look carefully at the time connectives.

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At last, we saw the famous painting and I understood what all the fuss was about.
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On the bus home, I sketched the painting from memory.
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Last month, my class visited the city art gallery.
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After that, we split into groups to explore different wings.
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First, our teacher took us through the entrance and explained the rules.
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I spent nearly an hour in the sculpture hall without moving.
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It was the day I decided I wanted to be an artist.
TipSome sentences won't have obvious time connectives — use common sense about what order makes sense.
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Write a Recount From an Unusual Viewpoint

Write a recount from the perspective of an object or animal — not a person. For example: a dog's recount of a day at the park, or a backpack's recount of a school day. Use first person and past tense.

Viewpoint chosen: ___

My recount:

TipThis creative challenge deepens understanding of perspective and voice in writing.
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Match: Recount to Its Type

Draw a line to match each recount extract to the type of recount it is.

I can't believe what happened today! So you know how I said...
On Sunday, 14 September, community members gathered at...
Tuesday 3rd. Cloudy. I've been thinking about what happened last week...
Dear Grandpa, I wanted to tell you about our trip to Canberra...
When I was eight, I had an encounter I have never forgotten...
Memoir (written long after the event)
Personal letter
News report
Diary entry
Informal message to a friend
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Tip: Time Connectives Are the Skeleton of a Recount

Time connectives hold a recount together. Without them, events feel jumbled and confusing. This week, every time you write an event in a recount, ALWAYS begin it with a time connective. Don't skip this — it is one of the most important habits for recount writers.

  • 1Write the time connective FIRST, then the event — never the other way
  • 2Make a list of 10 time connectives and keep it next to you when writing
  • 3Try using a more sophisticated connective like 'Shortly afterwards' or 'As soon as'
  • 4Find time connectives in a book you are reading — notice how authors use them
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Improve the Recount

This recount is factually correct but very dull. Rewrite it making it engaging: add a strong opening, personal reactions, varied time connectives, and a meaningful reflection. ORIGINAL: 'We went camping. We put up the tent. We cooked food. We slept. The next day we came home. It was okay.'

My improved recount:

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Sort: Features That Improve a Recount

Sort each feature by whether it is a structural feature (how it is organised) or a language feature (how it is written).

Orientation at the start
Past tense verbs
Time connectives
Precise vocabulary
Reflection at the end
Personal reactions
Events in chronological order
Varied sentence structures
First person (I, we)
Vivid adjectives and adverbs
Structural feature
Language feature
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Write a Recount for a Specific Audience

Write the same event (a trip to the market) as two short recounts: one for a young child (simple language, fun tone) and one for an adult (more formal, precise details).

For a young child:

For an adult:

What language changes did you make? Why?

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Which Opening Is Stronger?

For each pair of recount openings, circle the stronger one and explain why.

A: 'On Saturday I went to the shops.' B: 'It started as an ordinary Saturday morning — until Mum said we were making a special trip.'

A is stronger
B is stronger

A: 'Last week we had the most embarrassing experience of our lives.' B: 'Last week things happened.'

A is stronger
B is stronger
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Write a Newspaper-Style Recount

Newspaper recounts use third person and formal language. Write a short newspaper-style recount (5–6 sentences) about something that happened in your community or home. Use a headline, and write in the third person (he/she/they).

Headline: ___

My newspaper recount:

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Match: Time Connective to Sophistication Level

More sophisticated time connectives make a recount sound more mature. Draw a line to match each simple connective to a more sophisticated alternative.

Then
After that
Finally
At the same time
Before
Simultaneously
Subsequently
Prior to this
Following this
Ultimately
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Write a Recount Using Sophisticated Time Connectives

Write a 5-sentence recount using at least 3 of these sophisticated connectives: subsequently, prior to this, simultaneously, meanwhile, ultimately, as a result, following this.

My recount:

Sophisticated connectives I used: ___

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Analyse a Published Recount

Find a diary entry, memoir extract or news report (in a book, magazine or online with a parent). Read it and answer these questions.

Source title and type (diary/memoir/news): ___

What is the orientation (who, when, where)?

List 3 time connectives the author uses: ___

Is it first or third person? ___ Past or present tense? ___

What does the author do well? What could be improved?

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Recount of a Historical Event

Write a recount from the perspective of a historical person (real or imagined) — a pioneer, an explorer, a First Nations person during colonisation, or a child in wartime. Research a little first if needed. Write in first person, past tense.

Historical person chosen: ___ Time period: ___

My historical recount:

TipThis links literacy with history. Encourage your child to think: what would this person have seen, felt and experienced?
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Tip: Recounts Teach You to Notice Your Own Life

Great recount writers notice things others don't. This week, practise NOTICING: what details made today interesting? What did you smell, see, hear? What surprised you? These details are the raw material of vivid recounts.

  • 1At the end of each day, write 3 things you noticed
  • 2Pick the most interesting detail and write it as a recount sentence
  • 3Describe one sensory detail from today (something you saw, heard or smelled)
  • 4Keep a 'noticing notebook' this week — add to it every day
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Compare Two Recounts of the Same Event

Imagine two people attended the same event but experienced it very differently. Write two short recounts (3–4 sentences each) of the same event from two different perspectives. Show how personal perspective shapes a recount.

Event: ___

Person 1's recount: ___

Person 2's recount: ___

How did perspective change the recount?

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Sort: Features of Fiction vs Features of Recount

Recounts and fiction stories share some features but differ in important ways. Sort each feature.

Retells real events
Has invented characters
Uses past tense
Uses time connectives
Written in first person (usually)
Has a problem and a resolution
Includes personal feelings
Ends with a reflection or lesson
Recount only
Fiction only
Both
TipThis comparison helps children understand genre differences — a key Year 3–4 literacy skill.
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Extended Recount: A Multi-Day Experience

Write a recount of a multi-day experience (a holiday, a sports tournament, a special week). Structure it across days using time connectives for the overall sequence AND within each day. Aim for 10–12 sentences.

Experience: ___ Duration: ___

My recount:

Time connectives used: ___

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Advanced: Which Recount Is Most Effective?

Read three versions of the same recount moment. Circle the most effective and explain why.

The finish line: A: I ran and finished the race. B: I crossed the finish line — my legs gave way and I sat down right there on the track. C: I ran really fast and I won and it was amazing and everyone cheered.

A is most effective
B is most effective
C is most effective
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Write a Memoir-Style Recount

A memoir is a form of recount written from a distance in time — looking back on an event and reflecting on what it meant. Write a memoir-style recount of a moment from your past (2–3 years ago). Include: what happened, how you felt then, and what you think or feel about it NOW looking back.

The memory: ___

My memoir-style recount:

What does this memory mean to me now?

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Evaluate Your Own Recount

Choose any recount you have written in this worksheet. Evaluate it honestly using this checklist.

Which recount am I evaluating? ___

Orientation: Does it clearly state who, when and where? YES/NO — Comment: ___

Events: Are they in order with time connectives? YES/NO — Comment: ___

Personal voice: Does the writing sound like me? YES/NO — Comment: ___

Tense: Is it consistently past tense? YES/NO — Comment: ___

Reflection: Is it thoughtful? YES/NO — Comment: ___

One thing I am proud of: ___

One thing I would improve: ___

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Design a Recount Checklist

Create a recount writing checklist that a Year 3 student could use before publishing their work. Include at least 8 checklist items.

My recount checklist:

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Spark: Record a Spoken Recount

Record yourself telling a recount out loud (on a phone or device). Listen back — does it have a clear orientation, ordered events and a reflection? Then write the spoken recount as a polished written one.

  • 1Choose a memory and speak it out loud for 1–2 minutes
  • 2Record it on a phone or device
  • 3Play it back and note: does it have all recount features?
  • 4Write a polished version based on the spoken one
  • 5Compare: what did you say aloud that you wouldn't have written? What did you leave out?
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Recount Feature: Present or Missing?

Read each extract and circle whether the recount feature is PRESENT or MISSING.

'Yesterday we went to the zoo.' — Does it have an orientation?

present
missing

'It was fun.' — Does it have sequenced events?

present
missing

'First we saw the lions. Then we fed the giraffes. After that we had lunch.' — Time connectives?

present
missing

'We drove home at four o'clock.' — Is it in past tense?

present
missing

'It was the best day ever and I hope to go again!' — Personal reflection?

present
missing
TipIdentifying missing features in sample texts trains self-editing — a crucial Year 3 writing skill.
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Sort: Recount Sentences Into the Right Section

Sort these sentences into the correct section of a recount.

Last Saturday, my family and I visited the botanical gardens.
First, we walked along the main path and looked at the rose garden.
It was one of the most relaxing mornings I can remember.
After that, we found a shady spot and had our picnic lunch.
On Sunday morning, our class went on an excursion to the museum.
I learned so much and I would love to go back again.
Then we visited the butterfly house, which was incredible.
Finally, we stopped at the gift shop before heading home.
Orientation
Events
Reflection
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Match: Time Connective to Its Position

Draw a line from each time connective to where it typically appears in a recount.

First,
Then,
Next,
After that,
Finally,
Meanwhile,
Later,
At the end,
very beginning — first event
second event
middle events
events happening at the same time
events that come somewhat later
transitional events
last or near-last event
concluding event
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Write a Recount: A Favourite Memory

Write a full personal recount about a favourite memory. Include: orientation (who, when, where), at least four sequenced events with time connectives, past tense throughout, and a personal reflection.

My topic: ___

Orientation (who, when, where): ___

Events (use time connectives):

My reflection: ___

TipDiscuss the memory orally first. Ask: who was there? Where did it happen? What happened first, second, and then? How did you feel at the end?
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Recount: First Person or Third Person?

Circle whether each sentence is written in FIRST PERSON (I/we) or THIRD PERSON (he/she/they).

I woke up early and rushed to get ready.

first person
third person

She arrived at the party feeling nervous.

first person
third person

We drove for two hours before we reached the beach.

first person
third person

They celebrated with a big family dinner.

first person
third person

After breakfast, I helped pack the car.

first person
third person
TipPersonal recounts should be in first person throughout. Third person is used in factual or news recounts.
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Order: The Parts of a Recount

Put these recount sections in the correct order.

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Reflection — how you felt and what it meant to you
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Orientation — who, when, where
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Event 3 — with a time connective
?
Event 1 — the first thing that happened
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Event 2 — with a time connective
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Recount: Add the Missing Orientation

This recount is missing an orientation. Write one that sets the scene properly: '___. First, we boarded the ferry. After an hour, we arrived at the island. Then we explored the rock pools. Finally, we ate fish and chips on the beach. It was a wonderful day.'

My orientation sentence(s): ___

Why orientation is important: ___

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Sort: Strong Recount Words vs Weak Recount Words

Sort these time connectives and words by whether they make a recount STRONG (varied, interesting) or WEAK (repetitive, plain).

Shortly afterwards
And then
As soon as we arrived
and stuff
Late in the afternoon
and then we also
At that moment
things happened
Just before sunset
Strong (varied / specific)
Weak (repetitive / vague)
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Tip: The Recount Planning Template

Before writing any recount, use this template to plan. It takes 3 minutes and makes the writing much better.

  • 1Orientation: Who? When? Where? Write 1–2 sentences.
  • 2Event 1: What happened first? Write key words.
  • 3Events 2–4: What happened next? Add time connectives.
  • 4Reflection: How did you feel? What do you think looking back?
  • 5Check: is everything in past tense and first person?
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Match: Recount to Its Audience

Draw a line to match each recount description to its most likely audience.

A personal recount of a family holiday
A news recount of a local event
A historical recount of an explorer's journey
A recount of a school excursion in a class newsletter
A recount of a sporting match
Sports fans reading a match report
Family reading a personal letter
Students reading a textbook
Community members reading a school newsletter
Newspaper readers
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Recount: Edit for Tense Consistency

Rewrite this recount paragraph with all verbs in PAST TENSE: 'We get to the park and I am really excited. My dog runs ahead and I chase after him. We play fetch for a long time and then we sit under a tree.'

My past tense version:

Verbs I changed: ___

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Recount or Other Text Type?

Circle whether each text extract is a RECOUNT or a DIFFERENT text type.

Last Tuesday, I visited the zoo with my family...

recount
other text type

Butterflies have four wings and six legs...

recount
other text type

On Saturday morning we went to the farmers market...

recount
other text type

First, add the flour and mix well. Then add eggs...

recount
other text type

I believe students should have more say in school decisions...

recount
other text type
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Recount: Add Vivid Detail

Here is a plain recount: 'We went to the beach. I swam. We had lunch. We went home.' Add detail (sensory words, adjectives, adverbs) to each event to make it vivid and interesting.

My vivid version:

Details I added (senses / adjectives / adverbs): ___

TipThis upgrading task separates the structure task from the language task — children can focus on enriching the language.
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Sort: Personal Recount vs Factual/News Recount Features

Sort these features into PERSONAL RECOUNT or FACTUAL/NEWS RECOUNT.

Written in first person (I)
Written in third person (they/he/she)
Includes personal feelings and reactions
Objective — only states facts
Usually informal tone
Usually formal tone
Ends with personal reflection
May end with a quote from a witness
Personal recount
Factual / News recount
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Recount: The Best Day of My Life

Write a full recount about the best day of your life (so far!). Use all recount features: orientation, events with time connectives, past tense, first person, and a heartfelt reflection.

My topic: ___

Full recount:

Recount features I included: ___

TipAllow your child full creative freedom here. Any memory, large or small, is valid. This is about authentic writing.
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Recount: Strong Reflection or Weak Reflection?

Circle whether each recount ending is a STRONG or WEAK personal reflection.

'It was good. I liked it.'

strong
weak

'Looking back, it was a day that reminded me how lucky I am to have such a wonderful family.'

strong
weak

'Then we went home.'

strong
weak

'I felt proud and happy — it was the first time I had ever done something like that on my own.'

strong
weak

'The end.'

strong
weak
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Order: Writing a Recount Step by Step

Put these writing steps in the best order for producing a quality recount.

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Choose a topic (a memory or event)
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Plan: orientation, 4 events, reflection
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Write a first draft
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Check: past tense, first person, time connectives
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Add vivid detail and improve word choices
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Edit for spelling and punctuation
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Publish / share your final recount
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Recount: Write About a Challenge You Overcame

Write a recount about a time you found something difficult but kept going. Include your thoughts and feelings at each stage — before, during, and after.

My challenge: ___

Before (orientation + how I felt): ___

During (events + feelings): ___

After (reflection): ___

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Recount Reading: Find Examples in Real Texts

Find two real-life recounts — one in a newspaper or news website, one in a book or journal. Note the features of each and compare how they are written.

  • 1Find a news article that recounts an event
  • 2Find a personal recount in a book, blog or diary
  • 3List the recount features each one uses
  • 4Compare: how are they the same? How are they different?
  • 5Write 2–3 sentences about what you noticed
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Recount: My Learning About Recounts

Write a recount of learning about recounts! Describe what you knew at the start, what activities you did, and what you understand now.

Orientation (when I started this topic): ___

Events (what I learned / did): ___

Reflection (what I understand now): ___

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Match: Recount Language Feature to Example

Draw a line from each recount language feature to an example of it.

Time connective
Past tense verb
First person pronoun
Sensory detail
Personal reflection
I felt incredibly proud of myself.
The salty breeze stung my eyes.
We explored the market stalls.
After that, we found a quiet spot.
Finally, we caught the last bus home.
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Recount: Past or Present Tense?

Circle whether each verb is in PAST TENSE (correct for recount) or PRESENT TENSE (needs fixing).

We walked along the path.

past (correct)
present (fix it)

She is very excited.

past (correct)
present (fix it)

He spotted a koala in the tree.

past (correct)
present (fix it)

We eat our lunch by the river.

past (correct)
present (fix it)

They arrived just in time.

past (correct)
present (fix it)
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Recount: Imaginary Historical Recount

Write a recount as if you were a famous historical figure living through a key event (e.g. a young convict arriving in Australia, or a child during the gold rush). Use first person and past tense.

Who I am and when: ___

My historical recount:

Historical features I tried to include: ___

TipHistorical imaginative recounts build empathy and cross-curricular connections. Encourage research if needed.
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Recount Peer Edit: Share and Improve

Share your recount with a family member or friend. Ask them to check: Did I include an orientation? Did I use time connectives? Did I stay in past tense? Did I reflect at the end?

  • 1Share your recount with a reader
  • 2Ask them to tick each recount feature they find
  • 3Note any feature they couldn't find
  • 4Revise your recount based on their feedback
  • 5Write one sentence about what you improved
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Sort: Recount Vocabulary from Simple to Sophisticated

Sort these time connectives and linking phrases from SIMPLE to SOPHISTICATED.

and then
after that
as the afternoon wore on
next
later in the day
by the time we arrived
first
shortly afterwards
just as the sun was setting
Simple (Year 1–2 level)
Developing (Year 3)
Sophisticated (Year 4+)
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Recount: Write and Self-Edit

Write a short recount (6–8 sentences) about anything you choose. Then use the self-editing checklist: orientation ✓, events in order ✓, time connectives ✓, past tense ✓, first person ✓, reflection ✓.

My recount:

Self-edit results (what I found and fixed): ___

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Recount Self-Assessment and Goals

Reflect on your ability to write recounts. Write what you do well, what you find difficult, and your writing goal for next time.

I write recounts well when I: ___

I still find this difficult: ___

My goal for my next recount: ___

One recount technique I want to get better at: ___

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Spark: Recount Portfolio

Over the next month, write one short recount each week about something that happened. Collect them in a portfolio. At the end of the month, read back through and notice how your recounts improve over time.

  • 1Week 1: Write a recount about something small (a meal, a walk)
  • 2Week 2: Write a recount about something exciting
  • 3Week 3: Write a recount about a challenge
  • 4Week 4: Write your best recount yet
  • 5End of month: Read all four. What improved? What would you change?
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Recount Vocabulary: Which Time Connective Fits?

Circle the best time connective for each sentence in a recount.

___ we arrived at the beach, we set up our towels.

As soon as
Therefore
However

We swam for an hour. ___, we had lunch in the shade.

After that
Instead
Although

The journey took all morning. ___, we reached the summit just before noon.

As a result
Finally
Even so

___ the sun set, we packed up and headed back.

Just as
Despite
Whereas
TipVarying time connectives is a key step toward more sophisticated recount writing.
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Sort: Recount Time Connectives by Sophistication

Sort these time connectives from SIMPLE to SOPHISTICATED.

first
then
as soon as we arrived
next
after that
by the time the afternoon ended
and
later that morning
just as the light began to fade
Simple
Developing
Sophisticated
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Recount: A Nature Experience

Write a recount about a time you experienced something in nature (a storm, a sunset, finding an animal, a rainy day, a walk in the bush). Use sensory details in every paragraph.

My nature experience: ___

Orientation:

Events with time connectives:

Reflection:

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Recount: Identify the Weak Spot

Read each recount extract and circle what is MISSING or WEAK.

'We went to the zoo. We saw animals. It was good. The end.'

no orientation
no time connectives
no reflection
all of these

'Last Tuesday I visited the museum with my class. There were interesting exhibits. I enjoyed it.'

no orientation
no specific events listed
no past tense
no personal pronouns

'On Saturday morning, Mum and I go to the market. We buy fruit. It is very busy.'

no time connectives
wrong tense (present not past)
no orientation
no reflection
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Match: Recount Opening Lines to Their Orientation Type

Draw a line from each recount opening to what orientation information it provides.

Last summer, our family drove to the coast.
On a rainy Friday in March, my class went on an excursion.
During the school holidays, I stayed with my grandparents in the country.
It was my eighth birthday when everything went wrong.
who + when + where + hint of event
when + who + event type
when + who + where
when + who + foreshadowing
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Recount: Write a News-Style Recount

Write a short news-style recount (4–5 sentences) of a school or community event. Use third person (he/she/they) and a formal tone — but keep it in past tense with clear time ordering.

Event: ___ Date: ___

My news recount:

Differences from a personal recount I noticed: ___

TipNews recounts differ from personal ones in voice and formality. This task builds awareness of audience and purpose in writing.
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Recount Reading Hunt: Find Features in Real Books

Open an autobiography, memoir, or narrative non-fiction book. Find one recount passage. List all the recount features it uses.

  • 1Find a recount passage in any autobiography or memoir
  • 2List the recount features you can find
  • 3Note: does it use first or third person?
  • 4Copy down the best time connective you find
  • 5Share your favourite line from the passage
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Recount: Cross-Curriculum — Recount a Science Experiment

Write a recount of a science activity or experiment you have done. Use past tense, first person, time connectives, and a reflection on what you discovered.

Experiment name / topic: ___

Orientation: ___

Events (what we did step by step): ___

Reflection (what I discovered): ___

TipScience experiment recounts are a real-world application of this text type. They are also excellent practise for structured writing.
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Sort: Recount Reflection Quality

Sort these recount endings from WEAKEST to STRONGEST reflection.

Then we went home.
It was fun.
It was the best day of my holidays.
I felt proud and tired but very happy when I finally crossed the finish line.
Looking back, I realise that day changed how I think about trying new things.
The end.
Weak
Developing
Strong
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Recount: Upgrade the Reflection

Here are three weak recount reflections. Upgrade each one to make it more thoughtful and specific: 1) 'It was fun.' 2) 'I liked it.' 3) 'Then we went home and that was the end.'

Upgraded reflection 1: ___

Upgraded reflection 2: ___

Upgraded reflection 3: ___

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Recount Grammar Check: Right or Wrong?

Circle whether each recount sentence uses grammar CORRECTLY for this text type.

We walked to the park and played for two hours. (past tense, first person)

correct
incorrect

The birds are singing in the trees all morning. (present tense)

correct
incorrect

After that, I felt happier than I had in weeks. (past tense, first person)

correct
incorrect

Finally, they go home and eat dinner. (present tense)

correct
incorrect

First, we arrived at the beach and set up our spot.

correct
incorrect
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Order: The Events of a School Excursion Recount

Put these recount sentences in the most logical chronological order.

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On Tuesday morning, our class boarded the bus to the science museum.
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After that, we watched a 20-minute film about the solar system.
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First, we explored the interactive technology exhibition.
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Then we ate lunch in the courtyard.
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Finally, we piled back onto the bus for the trip home.
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It was one of the most interesting excursions we have ever had.
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Recount: Write About Something You've Never Recounted Before

Write a recount about an event you've never written about before — something small but memorable: the day you learned something difficult, a funny moment, or a quiet, perfect afternoon.

My memory: ___

My recount:

Why I chose this memory: ___

TipSmall, personal moments often make the richest recounts. Encourage your child to pick something specific rather than something 'big'.
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Recount Mastery: Final Reflection

Write your final reflection on what you now know and can do with recount writing. Be specific about what you have improved and what you will do differently next time.

My best recount skill is: ___

I used to struggle with ___ but now I: ___

Next time I write a recount, I will: ___

One piece of recount advice I would give to a friend: ___

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Spark: Recount Your Day, Every Day for a Week

Each evening this week, write a 3–5 sentence recount of your day. Focus on: one key event, a clear time sequence, and a personal reflection. At the end of the week, read back and choose your favourite.

  • 1Day 1: Recount a moment from this morning
  • 2Day 2: Recount something new you tried today
  • 3Day 3: Recount a conversation or interaction
  • 4Day 4: Recount something you saw or noticed
  • 5Day 5: Recount your favourite moment of the week — then pick your best recount
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Recount: The Moment That Changed Something

Write a recount about a small moment that changed how you thought or felt about something — learning to ride a bike, helping someone, making a mistake. Show the before and after.

The moment: ___

Orientation: ___

Events: ___

Reflection — how it changed me: ___

TipReflective recounts that show a moment of change are some of the most powerful personal writing. Encourage honesty and specificity.
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Recount Editing: Find the Tense Error

Circle the verb that is in the WRONG tense for a personal recount (should be past tense).

We arrived at the beach, then runs down to the water.

arrived (correct)
runs (incorrect — should be 'ran')

She felt nervous but decided to try anyway.

felt (correct)
decided (correct — both are past tense)

After lunch, we walked to the park and play on the equipment.

walked (correct)
play (incorrect — should be 'played')

First, I woke up early. Then I pack my bag in a hurry.

woke (correct)
pack (incorrect — should be 'packed')
TipConsistency in past tense is one of the most important editing skills for recount writing.