Writing Analytical Paragraphs (TEEL/PEEL)
Sort: Description or Analysis?
Sort each statement into the correct column.
Which Is the Topic Sentence?
Circle the sentence that would make the best topic sentence for an analytical paragraph.
About a poem on war:
About a novel's character:
About a persuasive text:
Rewrite Description as Analysis
For each statement, decide whether it is description (D) or analysis (A). Rewrite any description statements as analysis.
1. 'The writer uses a lot of short sentences at the end of the chapter.' D or A? _____ If D, rewrite as analysis:
2. 'The repeated use of short sentences during the climax creates a breathless, urgent pace that mirrors the character's panic and forces the reader to race through the lines.' D or A? _____
3. 'The author uses the metaphor of a storm to describe the character's anger.' D or A? _____ If D, rewrite as analysis:
Embedded or Dropped Quotation?
Circle the version that embeds the quotation more smoothly.
Which version embeds the quotation better?
Which version embeds the quotation better?
Integrating a Quotation
Rewrite each clunky quotation integration so it flows naturally into an analytical sentence.
Clunky: The author uses the word shattered. This creates a sense of destruction. Improved:
Clunky: There is a metaphor in the text. The author writes that her smile was a locked door, meaning she was hiding something. Improved:
Clunky: The poem has the line 'cold as a grave'. This is a simile. Improved:
Write a Topic Sentence
For each question below, write a strong topic sentence for an analytical paragraph. Your topic sentence should make an argument — a claim about how and why something works — not just name a technique.
Question: How does the author create sympathy for the main character? Topic sentence:
Question: How does the setting contribute to the mood of the story? Topic sentence:
Question: How does the author use contrast in this extract? Topic sentence:
Sort: Strong or Weak Explanation?
Sort each explanation into the correct column.
Write a TEEL Paragraph
Read the extract and write a full TEEL analytical paragraph in response to the question: How does the author create a sense of danger in this extract? Label each part T / E / E / L.
Extract: 'The door at the end of the corridor was not quite closed. A thin bar of yellow light leaked from beneath it. Somewhere beyond — in the room she had promised herself she would never enter — something moved.' Write your TEEL paragraph here (label T / E / E / L):
Improve an Explanation
Each explanation below is too vague or descriptive. Rewrite it to be more specific and analytical.
Weak: 'The metaphor creates a vivid image that makes the reader feel emotions.' Strong rewrite:
Weak: 'The author uses repetition effectively here.' Strong rewrite:
Weak: 'This shows that the character is going through a difficult time.' Strong rewrite:
Full TEEL Paragraph — Practise the Structure
Write a TEEL analytical paragraph about any text you are currently reading, responding to this question: How does the author develop a character so that the reader understands their motivation? Label each part.
Text and character: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph (labelled T / E / E / L):
Practise the Explanation — Push Deeper
Write two versions of the explanation for the same evidence: one that stops at surface observation, and one that pushes deeper into what the language reveals about theme, character, or the author's purpose.
Evidence: 'The silence pressed down on her like a hand.' Version 1 (surface explanation — names the technique and basic effect):
Version 2 (deeper explanation — connects to character, theme, or author's purpose in this specific text):
Rank the Topic Sentences
Sort these topic sentences from weakest to strongest by placing them in the correct column.
Two-Evidence Paragraph
Write a TEEL paragraph that includes two pieces of evidence (two quotations or specific references). The two pieces of evidence should build on each other — the second should deepen or complicate the point made by the first, not just repeat it.
Question: How does the author create a sense of isolation in the text? Your two-evidence TEEL paragraph:
Rewrite a Weak Paragraph
Rewrite the paragraph below to improve its analytical quality. Strengthen the topic sentence, improve the quotation integration, develop the explanation, and write a more effective link.
Weak paragraph: 'The author uses good language in this extract. He uses the words dark and cold. These are descriptive. They make the reader feel scared. The author writes this well and uses good techniques throughout.' Improved TEEL paragraph:
Write an Analytical Paragraph on a Poem
Choose a poem you have read and write a TEEL analytical paragraph in response to this question: How does the poet use language to explore a significant idea? Label each part.
Poem title and poet: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph:
Practise Analytical Vocabulary
Replace each vague analytical phrase with a more precise and powerful one. Use the replacement bank: constructs, subverts, juxtaposes, implies, positions, interrogates, undermines, foregrounds.
Vague: 'The author shows that the character is powerful.' Precise (use 'constructs' or 'positions'): ___________________________________________
Vague: 'The author changes what we expected.' Precise (use 'subverts' or 'undermines'): ___________________________________________
Vague: 'The author puts two different things next to each other.' Precise (use 'juxtaposes'): ___________________________________________
Vague: 'The author makes us look closely at this idea.' Precise (use 'foregrounds' or 'interrogates'): ___________________________________________
Write on a Non-Literary Text
Choose a non-literary text — an advertisement, a news article, a speech, or an opinion piece. Write a TEEL analytical paragraph responding to this question: How does the writer position the audience to accept a particular point of view?
Text type and source: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph:
Write Three TEEL Paragraphs on One Text
Write three separate TEEL analytical paragraphs about any text you are currently reading. Each paragraph should make a different argument about a different aspect of the text. Together, the three paragraphs should build a coherent case about the text's meaning or purpose.
Text: ___________________________________________ Paragraph 1 (labelled T/E/E/L):
Paragraph 2 (labelled T/E/E/L):
Paragraph 3 (labelled T/E/E/L):
Practise with a Challenging Text
Find the most difficult or complex text you have read recently. Choose one moment, passage, or line that most rewards analytical attention. Write a TEEL paragraph exploring it. Then write 2–3 sentences reflecting on what made this analysis challenging.
Text and chosen passage: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph:
What made this analysis challenging:
Sort: Which Part of TEEL?
Sort each sentence into the correct TEEL position.
Analyse an Author's Craft Choice
Choose any craft choice made by an author — a structural decision, a narrative technique, a stylistic pattern — and write a TEEL paragraph explaining how and why this choice shapes the reader's experience. Your argument should be debatable — someone should be able to disagree with it.
Your TEEL paragraph:
Write a Contrasting Analytical Paragraph
Write two TEEL paragraphs that argue opposing interpretations of the same quotation or moment in a text. Both must be genuinely argued from the text — neither is 'wrong'. After writing both, write 2–3 sentences discussing which you find more convincing and why.
Text and chosen moment: ___________________________________________ Paragraph 1 (Interpretation A):
Paragraph 2 (Interpretation B):
Which do you find more convincing and why:
TEEL on a Visual Text
Write a TEEL paragraph analysing a visual text — an advertisement, film poster, photograph, or political cartoon. Your topic sentence should make an argument about how a visual feature creates meaning or influences the audience. Your evidence should precisely describe the visual feature. Your explanation should connect it to effect and purpose.
Visual text: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph:
Self-Edit a TEEL Paragraph
Take any TEEL paragraph you have written in this worksheet. Run it through the full TEEL test: T — is it an argument, not a description? E — is the evidence specific and relevant? E — is the explanation specific to this text and this quotation? L — does the link add something new? Rewrite any part that does not pass the test.
Original paragraph:
TEEL test results (which parts passed and which need work):
Edited paragraph:
Analytical Paragraph on Structure
Write a TEEL paragraph analysing a structural choice in a text you have read — how the story begins, where a key revelation comes, how the ending relates to the beginning, how the narrative is sequenced. Structural analysis is as valid and rich as language analysis.
Text and structural feature: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph:
Write a Mini-Essay
Write a three-paragraph mini-essay (three TEEL paragraphs + a brief introduction and conclusion) responding to any question about a text you have read. The essay should have a coherent argument that builds across all three paragraphs.
Text and essay question: ___________________________________________ Introduction (1–2 sentences):
Paragraph 1:
Paragraph 2:
Paragraph 3:
Conclusion (2–3 sentences):
Compare Two Analytical Paragraphs
Find two published analytical paragraphs about the same text or author — from a journal, a review, or a study guide. Write 5–6 sentences comparing them: How does each writer approach the topic sentence? What evidence do they use? Which explanation is stronger and why?
Source 1: ___________________________________________ Source 2: ___________________________________________ Comparative analysis:
Write an Argumentative Topic Sentence for a Challenging Question
Write a strong topic sentence for each of these challenging analytical questions. Each topic sentence must make a specific, arguable claim.
Question: 'Is the narrator of this story reliable?' Write a topic sentence that takes a specific position:
Question: 'Does the text challenge or reinforce social norms?' Write a topic sentence:
Question: 'To what extent is the ending satisfying or deliberately unsatisfying?' Write a topic sentence:
Analyse a Character Using TEEL
Write a TEEL paragraph that analyses a character's moral complexity — a character who cannot be simply labelled 'good' or 'bad'. Your topic sentence should reflect this complexity. Your evidence should show a moment where the character's ambiguity is most visible.
Character and text: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph:
Analyse the Ending of a Text
Write a TEEL paragraph analysing how a text ends and what the ending suggests about the author's purpose. Is the ending resolved or unresolved? Hopeful or bleak? Expected or surprising? What does the author's choice of ending reveal about what they want the reader to take away?
Text: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph on the ending:
The Explanation as Argument
Write three versions of an explanation for the same piece of evidence, each making a slightly different interpretive argument. Then discuss: which interpretation is most defensible and why?
Evidence: 'He locked the door and did not look back.' Interpretation 1 (about resolve):
Interpretation 2 (about guilt):
Interpretation 3 (about fear):
Which is most defensible in the context of a specific text, and why:
Write a Response to a NAPLAN-Style Question
Respond to this NAPLAN-style question in one well-structured TEEL paragraph: 'In the short story below, how does the author make the setting feel threatening? Use evidence from the text to support your answer.' The text: 'The forest had no name that anyone used. People went in, but not everyone came back out, and those who did return rarely spoke of what they had seen. The trees here were old enough to have their own silences.'
Your TEEL paragraph:
Analytical Writing on Australian Literature
Write two TEEL analytical paragraphs on any Australian text you have read — fiction, poetry, or non-fiction. The two paragraphs should build a coherent case about what makes this text distinctively Australian in its concerns, language, or perspective.
Text: ___________________________________________ Paragraph 1:
Paragraph 2:
Analytical Paragraph on a Non-Fiction Text
Write a TEEL analytical paragraph about a non-fiction text — a speech, an editorial, a memoir extract, or a popular science article. Analyse how the writer's choices of evidence, structure, and language serve their argument. The topic sentence should make a specific claim about how the text works rhetorically.
Text type and source: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph:
Write and Annotate an Essay Plan
Plan a complete analytical essay (five paragraphs: intro + three TEEL + conclusion) on any text you have studied. Write the essay plan in full — topic sentences for all three body paragraphs, and one piece of evidence + one-sentence explanation for each. Then annotate the plan: explain how the three paragraphs build a coherent argument.
Text and essay question: ___________________________________________ Introduction plan:
Paragraph 1 topic sentence + evidence + explanation:
Paragraph 2 topic sentence + evidence + explanation:
Paragraph 3 topic sentence + evidence + explanation:
Conclusion plan:
Annotation — how do the three paragraphs build a coherent argument:
Extended Analytical Response
Write a complete analytical essay (intro + three TEEL paragraphs + conclusion, approximately 400–500 words) on a text of your choosing. The essay should have a clear overall argument that each paragraph develops.
Your essay:
Identify and Correct TEEL Errors
The essay excerpt below contains common TEEL errors. Identify each error and explain how to fix it, then rewrite the weak paragraph.
Paragraph: 'The author does a lot of good things in this extract. He uses metaphors and similes and personification. The story is interesting. In conclusion, the author uses many techniques effectively.' Errors identified and how to fix them:
Rewritten paragraph:
Analytical Writing on Ambiguity
Write a TEEL paragraph exploring an ambiguous moment in a text — a moment that can be read in two or more significantly different ways. Your topic sentence should acknowledge the ambiguity. Your explanation should explore at least two possible readings and argue why the ambiguity itself is meaningful.
Text and ambiguous moment: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph:
Analyse a Text with a Social or Political Dimension
Write two TEEL paragraphs about a text that engages with a social or political issue — racism, inequality, environmental concerns, gender, power. Your analysis should connect the text's language choices to the social or political ideas it explores or challenges.
Text and social/political dimension: ___________________________________________ Paragraph 1:
Paragraph 2:
Evaluate Your Own Analytical Writing
Choose the strongest TEEL paragraph you have written in this worksheet. Write a 5–6 sentence evaluation of it: What does it do well? Where is it weakest? How would you improve it if you had more time? What mark do you think it would receive in a school assessment and why?
Paragraph you are evaluating:
Your evaluation:
Annotated Analytical Paragraph
Write a TEEL paragraph and then add detailed annotations explaining every decision you made: why this topic sentence, why this quotation, why these specific words in your explanation, why this link. The annotations should demonstrate your understanding of the craft of analytical writing.
Your annotated TEEL paragraph:
Analyse a Text's Opening
Write a TEEL paragraph analysing the opening of any text you have read. How does the author begin — what do they choose to foreground, and what effect does this opening create? What does the opening set up or promise for the rest of the text?
Text: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph on the opening:
Analytical Writing on Dialogue
Write a TEEL paragraph analysing how dialogue functions in a text. What do characters say? What do they not say? What does the language characters use reveal about their relationships, power dynamics, or inner states?
Text and dialogue moment: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph:
Write About a Text You Disagree With
Write two TEEL paragraphs about a text you found unsatisfying, unconvincing, or flawed. Your analysis should identify specifically what is weak or problematic and argue why — using evidence from the text. This is negative criticism, and it requires just as much analytical precision as positive criticism.
Text: ___________________________________________ Paragraph 1 (negative criticism):
Paragraph 2 (negative criticism):
Complete Essay Under Time Pressure
Write a complete analytical essay (intro + three TEEL paragraphs + conclusion) in 45 minutes on this question: 'Choose a text you have read this year and argue that one aspect of its craft is particularly significant.' Set a timer. The goal is to produce a complete, structured, analytically sound essay within the time limit.
Your essay:
Self-assessment after finishing: what went well and what would you improve:
Read and Respond to Professional Criticism
Find a short piece of professional literary criticism or book review — from a newspaper, journal, or literary website. Read it carefully and write 5–7 sentences analysing how the critic structures their argument. Do they use TEEL-like structures? How do they integrate evidence? What makes their analysis more or less convincing?
Source: ___________________________________________ Your analysis of the critic's approach:
Analytical Paragraph on Context
Write a TEEL paragraph that connects a text's meaning to its context — the time, place, or social conditions in which it was written. Argue that understanding the context changes or enriches the reading of a specific aspect of the text.
Text and context: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph:
Analytical Synthesis: What Have You Learned?
Write a reflective analysis (7–9 sentences) of your own development as an analytical writer across this worksheet. What can you do now that you could not do at the start? What is still difficult? What is the most important insight about analytical writing that you will carry forward?
Your reflective analysis:
Write a Complete Essay on a Challenging Text
Write a complete analytical essay (intro + three TEEL + conclusion) on the most challenging text you have read this year. Choose a question that interests you genuinely. The essay should be approximately 500 words.
Your essay:
Edit a Peer's Analytical Paragraph
Exchange a TEEL paragraph with a family member or friend. Read their paragraph carefully and write an editorial comment (5–6 sentences) that: identifies the strongest part, identifies the weakest part, asks one genuine question about the interpretation, and makes one specific suggestion for improvement.
Paragraph you are editing:
Your editorial comment:
The Most Important Thing About TEEL
Write a short explanation (5–7 sentences) of what TEEL is, what it is for, and what the most important thing to understand about it is. Write it as if explaining to a student who has never heard of TEEL. Then write one sentence about what TEEL cannot do — what its limitations are.
Your explanation of TEEL:
What TEEL cannot do:
Teach the TEEL Structure
Design a ten-minute lesson to teach TEEL to a Year 5 student. Write the lesson plan, including: what you would say to introduce the concept, what example you would use, and how you would check whether the student understood. Write it in a clear, friendly semi-formal register.
Your lesson plan:
Advanced Topic Sentence Workshop
Write five topic sentences for five different analytical paragraphs about five different texts you have read. Each must: make a specific, debatable argument; indicate the technique being analysed; and gesture towards the effect on the reader or the broader significance. Then rank them from weakest to strongest and explain your ranking.
Five topic sentences: 1. ___________________________________________ 2. ___________________________________________ 3. ___________________________________________ 4. ___________________________________________ 5. ___________________________________________
Your ranking (strongest to weakest) and explanation:
A Letter to a Future Year 7 Student
Write a letter (8–10 sentences) to a Year 7 student who is about to begin studying analytical paragraph writing. What do you wish someone had told you at the start? What is the most important piece of advice about TEEL? What is the hardest part — and what makes it worth the effort?
Your letter:
Analytical Portfolio Entry
Select the analytical paragraph you are most proud of from this entire worksheet. Copy it here and write a 5–6 sentence self-evaluation explaining: why you selected this paragraph, what makes it your best work, and what you would improve if you were revising it one more time.
Selected paragraph:
Self-evaluation:
Write About a Text That Changed You
Write two analytical paragraphs about a text that genuinely affected you — changed how you thought about something, or made you feel something you had not felt before. The analysis should be genuine, not performed. Use TEEL structure but let the intellectual and emotional honesty come through.
Text: ___________________________________________ Paragraph 1:
Paragraph 2:
Comparative Essay: Two Texts
Write three TEEL paragraphs comparing two texts — one paragraph on similarities, one on differences, one on which text you find more effective and why. Each paragraph should analyse specific language or craft choices from both texts.
Text 1 and Text 2: ___________________________________________ Similarities paragraph:
Differences paragraph:
Which is more effective and why:
Analytical Writing on an Image
Write a full TEEL analytical paragraph about any image — a photograph, artwork, or film still. The analysis should work exactly like literary analysis: specific feature as evidence, explanation of how and why it creates meaning, connection to the image's broader purpose.
Image description and source: ___________________________________________ Your TEEL paragraph:
Write Your Finest Analytical Paragraph
Write the most analytically powerful paragraph you are capable of — choose any text, any question, any angle. Spend time planning, drafting, and revising before you write the final version here. This is your best work.
Text, question, and your finest TEEL paragraph:
Reflect on the Journey
Write a final synthesis (8–10 sentences) reflecting on what you have learned about analytical paragraph writing across all 94 previous activities. What are you now able to do that you could not do before? What remains challenging? What will you do differently in your next analytical task?
Your synthesis reflection:
Create an Analytical Writing Guide
Create a concise one-page analytical writing guide that you could use in future. Include: the TEEL structure with definitions, the specificity test, a list of analytical vocabulary, tips for the topic sentence, and one example of a strong TEEL paragraph. Write it as a reference tool you will actually use.
Your analytical writing guide:
Extended Comparative Essay
Write a complete five-paragraph comparative essay (intro + three TEEL + conclusion) comparing two texts you have studied this year. The essay should make a clear overall argument about how the two texts approach a shared theme or technique differently.
Your comparative essay:
Publish Your Best Work
Choose the analytical piece from this worksheet that you are most proud of. Prepare it for sharing — edit it carefully, ensure it is correctly structured and expressed, and write a 2–3 sentence introduction explaining what the piece is and why you chose it. Share it with someone — a family member, a friend, or post it somewhere your writing can be read.
Your piece and introduction:
Who will you share it with: